Question: How can I write Evolution Wars better?

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I'm wondering how to I can make Evolution Wars a better story. Does anyone have any HELPFUL and/or CONSTRUCTIVE criticism? I feel like the series is lacking something, but I cannot place my finger on it.
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LunaCentre's avatar
Depth. Sure there's some,but not enough to actually delve into. We know nearly nothing of the culture. History is minimal. Not sure where planets are, nor their names or individual history. Also this is the first Sci-Fi universe with only two races- humans and plasma beings. Surely with space travel a thousand years into the future we'd encounter something. Also, how do we travel from system to system? What planets are in what systems? It's just not a lot of lore.